Across the Board: Oranges, so far so good: So I wanted to write a small update about an upcoming title, Oranges . My editor Jax had this to say: Well so far it's a solid story ...Today is a follow on.
This is her feedback:
I have my usual issues with your ending - it's all very sudden and
unsatisfying. Like there's this massive lead up, but then bam it's
I think you need to extend that last bit of
fight sequence. You're in the action, and then it's like you're
are cool, but before you get there you need way more, well, action.BUT
it is a pretty complete story, which is good. :) There are not a
bajillion loose strings, which is good. I just think you need to expand
the climactic action sequence.